Thursday, April 1, 2010

FACE BOOK INTER ACTIVE NOVEL CHAPTER 4

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BÀs¡ms¡tbm th­nbmWv aëjy³ Hmtcm¶v D­mç¶Xv. Cu `qanbnse Gähpw {Iqcamb Zpc´w tcmKhpw Zmcn{ZyhpsamìaÃ, kvt\lcmlnXyhqw AëI¼tbmsS, ZbtbmsS ImêWyt¯msS aäpÅhsc ImWmëw tIÄ¡mëw {ian¡m¯ Hê a\ÊnÃmbvabpw XnckvIcn¡s]Sp¶ PohnXhpw Bæì.

Cuizchnizmkhpw ssZhkvt\lapÅhêw F´n\mWv hfsc s]s«¶v Cu `qanbn \nìw CÃmXmhp¶Xv? At\Iw klPohnIÄ¡v Bizmk¯nsâ A`bamæ¶, AXnssiXyapÅ ImänÂ\nìw BÀ¯ps]¿p¶ agbn \nìw ITn\shbnenÂ\nìw c£bpsS hShr£amæ¶hÀ F´n\mWv AXnthK¯n IS]pgInhogp¶Xv? Cuizct\mSv IqSpXeSpçt¼mÄ Ahsc IqSpX tNÀ¯p]nSnçtam? acWw Pohsâ ]pXpPohnXamæì F¶ tXm¶ep­mçì. PohnX¯nÂ\n¶v ]IÀ¯nsbSp¯ Hê kXyw PohnXkXyambn F¡m ehpw \ne\nÂçì. \nÝeZriys¯çdns¨gpXnb Cu hmçIÄ cLpdmbnbptSXmWv.

s]s«s¶\n¡v Hê XXzÚm\nbpsS tdmÄ In«ntbm Fì kwibn¡êXv. Nnet¸mÄ \½Ä k©cnç¶ hgnIÄ Nne tXm¶ep­mçw Fì am{Xw. æd¨pZnhk§Ä çap³]v Rms\mê acWip{iqjbn ]s¦Sp¯p. acn¨bmsf A{XbSp¯p\n¶ÃsX I­n«p­v. F\n¡bmsf Cãambnêì. AbmÄ sNbvX \·Isfçdn¨v ]eêw ]dªv Rm³ tI«n«p­v. AbmtfmsSm¸w klhkn¨ aëjyÀ¡v AbmfpsS ZbbpsS ImêWy¯nsâ kvt\l¯nsâ IYIÄ ]dbmë­v. Hê tcmKhpw {]Xy£¯n ImWn¡msX AbmfpsS Poh³ \ne¨p.

acWm\´c NS§pIfpsS Zriy§Ä IYbnembmepw kn\nabnembmepw I­psIm­v \n¡m³ Rm\ià\mWv. FsâbpÅv ]nSn¨p\nÀ¯m³ F\n¡mhnÃ. henb hmbnse Rm³ \nehnfnçw. \Kc¯n Hê]mSv sI«nS§Ä AbmfptSXWv. AXv apgphëw AbmÄ hmSI¡v sImSp¯nê¶Xv \nÊmc ss]kímbnêì. aëjys\ AbmÄ ASbmfs¸Sp¯nbnê¶Xv k¼¯nsâ AfhpXq¡¯neÃmbnêì. AXpsIm­v Xs¶ AbmfpsS Poh\v AhÀ kÀÆXns\¡mfpw hneaXn¨nêì F¶v AbmfpsS acWw ImWn¨pXì.

Rm\bmsf ]cnNbs¸«Xv Fsâ kn\naív AhmÀUv In«nb Znhks¯ Un¶À ]mÀ«nbn h¨mbnêì. A[nIsamìw AbmÄ ]dªnÃ. kn\na \¶mbnêì. Rm s\mcmsf ]cnNbs¸Sp¯nXcmw, Nnet¸mÄ Xm¦Ä¡v AbmÄ D]Imcs¸t«çw. AXmcmsWìw, Abmfn \n¶v F´p]Imcamé­mhpIsbìw F\n¡dnbnÃ. AXv ]dbp¶Xnëaps¼ AbmÄ t]mbn. thWsa¦n ]mÀ«nIgnª Znhkw Xs¶ Abmsf sNìI­v Imcy§Ä Xnc¡mambnêì.

Rm\§s\bmWv. Fsâ Hê kz`mh¯n NneXnt\mSv Rm\Sp¡mt\sd kabsaSpt¯çw. NneXv Xncn¨dnbmëw. AbmfpsS acWw I­t¸mÄ F\n¡Xv a\Ênembn.

IgnªZnhkw Fsâ Hê kplr¯v ho«n h¶t¸mÄ tNmZn¨p. \osbs´ ]Wn¡sc t]mbn ImWmXnê¶Xv? C\nbXnë IgnbWsa¦n Fs¶¡qSn ]ctemIt¯s¡Spt¡t­ Fs¶mê Nncnbn Rms\mXp¡n. ]s£ B kplr¯v Fs¶ hnSm³ `mhanÃmbnêì.

Ah³ ]dªp: \o Abmsf I­nês¶¦n Hê Imcyap­mbnêì. AbmÄsS Hê {^­në kn\nasbSp¡m³ ¹më­mbnêìhs{X... AXpw Hê {Sq tÌmdn. IY tI«t¸mÄ \nsâ tSÌnë ]änbXv.... ]s£ C\n ]dªn«v Imcyanà AhcXv thsd t{]mPIväv B¡n.. AXnsâ G{Kn saâv ssk³ sNbvXv Ignª¸gm \nsâ tSm]nIv AhnsS h¶Xv. ]Wn¡À kmÀ \ns¶çdn¨v AhtcmSv ]dªnêìhs{X.. ]s£ \ns¶ hnfn¨nê¶qìw ]dªp. t]ms«... Hs¡ Hmtcmtcm \nan¯§Ä......

CXnse´v \nan¯w Fì Rm\mtemNn¨n«p­v. kabw Imew Fs¶ms¡ ]dbp¶Xv aëjy PohnX¯n \nÀWmbIamb kÔnIfmsW¶v C¯cw \nan¯§fmWv HmÀas¸Sp¯pI.

Ah³ ]dªp: \ns¶ hnfn¨nês¶¶v Adnbmambnê¶ H꯳ Xs¶bm Cu t{]msPÎv Nmeqhm¡nbXv.

Bcv..

\nsâ Ignª ]S¯nsâ tImþHmÀUnt\äÀ Xs¶...AeIvkv æcy³.... AbmÄ¡v ]Wn¡À kmdns\ Adnbmambnêì... \nbpw Ahëw X½n Fs´¦nepw {]iv\apt­m... \n\¡v In«mambnê¶ Hê t{]mPÎv Ahs\´n\m X«nadnt¨...

F\n¡mtcmSpw Hê hntcm[hpanÃ... \n§fpsS i{Xp¡sf kvt\ln¸n³, \n§sf D]{Zhnç¶hÀçth­n {]mÀ°n¸n³ F¶m thZ]pkvXI¯n ]dbp¶Xv... ]pXnb \nba¯nse tem H^v eu... ]gb\nbaw Rm\ns¸m hmbn¡msdbnà AXpsIm­v Xs¶ I®në]Icw I®v, ]Ãnë ]Icw ]Ãv càXnë ]Icw càw F¶ AëhmZw Rm³ ad¶ncnçì. \½sf Gähpw D]{Zhn¨ hyànbpw \nc]cm[n Xs¶btÃ... Aht\mSv \ap¡v £an¨pIqsS....

]gb\nba¯nse ZmhnZv cmPmhv acn¡m³ InS¶t¸m Xsâ ]p{X\mb itemtamt\mSv skcqbmbpsS aI³ tbhm_ns\bpw, s_\yao\mb tKcbpsS aI³ iosabobpw X{´]qÀÆw sImìIfbWsa¶v D]tZinçì. acWInS¡bnepw ZmhoZnsâ {]XnImcNn´¡v H«pw ædhv h¶n«nÃmbnêì. Xsâ aIt\mSv kZp]tZi§Ä ]dªpsImSpç¶Xnë]Icw X¶nse Xs¶ ]qÀ¯nIcn¡m¯ {]XnImcw ]IcvìsImSpçIbmWv sNbvXXv ]eêsSbpw acWInS¡IÄ ZmhoZv cmPmhntâXpt]msebm....

]pXnb \nba¯nse tbiphnsâ æcniv aëjyæ;et¯mSv apgphëapÅ £abpsS hnfw_camWv. t^mÀKnhv s\Êv Ckv t\mSv F ^oenwKv _«v F Unknj³..... AeIvkv æcy³ PohnXs¯ A\ssekv sN¿p¶ Hê Imew hêw.

\obn§s\ XXzhpw ]dtªm­nêt¶m... B¼ntÅcv Hmtcm¶v sNbvtXm­v t]mhpw....

at\mlcm... Hê aëjys\ CÃmXm¡m³ Ah³ Xs¶ hnNmcn¡Ww... Fsâ a\Êpw Fsâ icochpw Fs¶ Aëkcnç¶nSt¯mfw Imew BÀçw Fs¶ Hìw sN¿m³ IgnbnÃ...FsâbpÅn km¯msâ ]ÀWimebp­mhê tXsb¶ {]mÀ°\sbbpÅp... Rm\nhnsS Hê]mSv hmbn¨pw FgpXnbpw kn\naI­pw tlm hÀ¡v sN¿pì. CsXms¡ F\ns¡mê ]mTamWv. Hê ]pXnb ko³, kntäzj³, A§s\ IêXnbm t]msc.... ASp¯ kn\naípÅ IY tIÄ¡m³ at\mlc\v kabapt­m..

Aht\mSv ]dª IY Rm³ \n\s¡gpXmw hmbn¨n«v adpædn¸b¡v.....

tlaeX hnPbsâ t]mÌpIÄ

{]nbs]« Ne¨n{XImcm, CXpt]mse C§s\ æsd FgpXnbXpsIm­v hà Imcyapt­m...?\n§fpsS(Fì h¨m apgph³ kn\na¡mêsSbpw) NeNn{X§fpsS IYbpsS, Zriy§fpsS kz`mhw F´m¶dnbmtam.... Csæn tIt«mfq...

Rm\nXv A¡ans«gpXp¶XpsIm­v Ft¶mSv ]nW§êtX....

1. Hê kn\naIYbn Cc« ktlmZc·mês­¦n Ahcnsemcmsf¦nepw Zpã\mbncnçw

2. \n§Ä ss¢amIvkn t_mw_v \nÀÆocyam¡m³ {iançIbmsW¦n Dd¸mbpw icnbmb hbÀ Xs¶ I­p]nSnçw

3. InS¡m³ t\cw s_Uv dqanse shfn¨w sISp¯nbmepw FÃmw Xs¶ ImWm³ Ignbpw. AÂ]w \oeIeÀ¶ \ndambncnçw Fs¶bpÅp.

4. \mbI³ F{X {Iqcamb aÀ±\w Gäphm§nbmepw thZ\ ]pd¯pImWn¡msX klnçw. At¸mgp­mæ¶ apdnhpIsf AbmÄ AhKWnçw. ]s£ Hê kv{Xo, AXv ImapInbmhmw, s]§fmhmw, A½bmhmw, B apdnhpIfn aê¶v hípt¼mÄ AbmÄ thZ\sIm­v ]pfbpw

5. Hê UnäIväohn\v tPmenbn \nìw kkvs]³Uv sNbvXmse tIkv sXfnbnçhm³ Ignbq

6. sXêhn \nì \r¯w sN¿m³ XpS§nbm \n§Ä I­pap«p¶ FÃmhÀçw B \r¯ NphSpIÄ Adnbpambncnçw

CXv icnbsöv sXfnbnçIbmsW¦n CXn\v DZmlcWklnXw adp]Sn ]dbm³ Ignªnsæn \n§fpsS Xe On¶`n¶ambnt¸mæw

CXpw ]dªv Rms\sâ hmkIqSnte¡v HmSnadbpì.. ASp¯ Znhkw ImWmw....

hoWmkpæamcsâ Nphscgp¯pIÄ

t]mfn ]n k¡dnbsb F\n¡v ]cnNbanà Fì ]dªm AXv AkXyamWv. acWs¸«Xnsâ (sImÃs¸«Xnsâ) ASp¯ Znhk¯nse ]{X¯nsâ ap³t]Pnse Nncn¨ apJw Fs¶ hÃmsX thZ\n¸n¨p. Ct¸mÄ Nm\epIfn \ndbp¶ apJw, IYIfpw D]IYIfpw Ahnizk\obamb amXrIIfn hf s¨gpXp¶ kXyamsW¶v hnizkn¸nç¶ hmÀ¯IÄ. hmÀ¯IÄ IYIfpsS XpSÀ¨IÄ Xs¶bmæì. ]{X¯ntebpw sSenhnj³ Nm\epIfntebpw hmÀ¯IÄ Rm³ hnizkn¡nÃ. CsXmìaà kXyw. ImcWw t]mfn ]n k¡dnb Ft¶mSv Hê]mSv Imcy§Ä ]dªn«p­v. kXyamb Imcy§Ä. C¶se IqSn Ah³ FsâbcnIn h¶nêì Imcy§Ä ]dªp F¶v Adnbn¨m \o t]mepw Ahnizknçw. AXo temI¯nsâ \nPamWv.

Bêw hftc­nbnê¶nÃ. P\n¨\mÄ apX hfÀ¶v Iuamcamæ¶Xnëaps¼ hfÀ¨bhkm\n¨nês¶¦n F{X \¶mbnêì. F¦n C§s\sbmìw D­mhnÃmbnêì.

F euhnwKv k¬, Unthm«Uv {_ZÀ, ssU\manIv FâÀ{¸nt\mÀ, I¼mjt\äv Bâv sI bdnwKv {^³Uv

CXn æsd Imcy§Ä Hìw F\n¡dnbnà ]s£ \à {^³Uv BWv AXdnbmw. AXmWtÃm FÃmhêw apXseSp¯Xpw.

Rm\hs\ BZyw t]cmbnêì hnfn¨nê¶Xv.. t]msf Fì hnfnçhm³ A{X ckw tXm¶nbnÃ. AXpsIm­v Xs¶ æsd Znhks¯ \nc´camb hÀ¯am\¯neqsS Ahs\sâ A¨mb\mbn.

]dbp¶ IYIÄ ça¸pdapÅ \njvIf¦ _meyhpw \ndhnsâ Iuamchpw \ap¡v HmÀ¡mw. a[pcapÅ _meyIuamcæXqle§fmbnêì Rmëw Ahëw X½n ]èh¨Xv..

Fs¶ kz]v\§fpsS h­Àem³Uv F¶mWv A¨mb³ hnfn¨nê¶Xv. Aê¬ hm§nX¶ ]pkvXI§fn F\nt¡ähpw Cãw A¼nfn A½mh³ IYm]pkvXIambnêì. AXnse thXmfIYIÄ hmbn¨v Ahsc Rm³ t]Sn¸n¨nêì. cm{Xn¡me§fn Fsâ ho«nenê¶mbnêì ]pkvXI§Ä hmbn¨Xv. IY tI«pIgnªm AêWnëw lcnçsams¡ ]pct¯¡nd§m³ t]Snbmbnêì. AXv Rm³ icnçw apXseSpçIbmbnêì.

A¨mb³ BZyambn h¶t¸mÄ Rm³ tNmZn¨Xv AêWns\çdn¨mbnêì. AêWns\ A¨mbm³ I­nêt¶m, Ah³ ]gbt¸mse¯s¶tbm F¶mbnêì... Bßm¡Ä¡v {]mbw IqSptam...? Bthm...? Ct¸mgpw \ë¯ aoibpw sN¼³ I®pIfpw B\s¨hnbpw Xs¶bmtWm Ah\v..? sseäv {Ko³ sN¡v jÀ«v BsWm C«ncnç¶Xv..? acnçt¼mÄ \½Ä C«nê¶ hkv{Xw Xs¶bmtWm Bßm¡fpw [cnçI.....?

AtXm Cu kn\naIfnsems¡ Imé¶ t]mse sshäv B³Uv sshäv BtWm....?

Aê¬ acn¨Xv A¨mb\dnªnê¶nÃ. 95se BKÌv amkw kzmX{´yZn\]cn]mSnbpsS `mKambn Ifnt¡­ Hê Um³knëth­n Xbv¨ Hê sshäv B³Uv sshäv {UÊn«v {]mIväokmbnêì. AXn\nSmbnte¡mbnêì lcnbpw kPohpsams¡ h¶Xv. AhÀ¡v AêWns\s¡ms­s´m Imcyaps­¶v Ifn¨psIm­nê¶ F\n¡v tXm¶n. s]s«¶v Aê¬ AhêsS IqsS tdmUnte¡nd§nbXpw Hê temdn h¶v AêWns\ X«ns¯dn¸n¨p. shfp¯ hkv{Xw apgphëw sN¼c¯n¸qhmbn. Ahs\ Hê t\mç ImWm³ t]mepw F\n¡v tXm¶nbnà ImcWw acn¨aëjysc Imé¶Xv F\n¡nãaÃmbnêì. acnç¶Xnëap¼pÅ cq]w Fsâ a\Ên \nìw amªpt]mæw AXpsIm­pXs¶ AêWns\ Rm³ I­sXbnÃ.

]s£ Ahs\ Ct¸mgpw Rm³ ImWmdp­v. Ct¸mÄ æd¨v \mfmbn Ah³ FhnsStbm Hfn¨ncnçì. Asæn Fsâ A½m½ ]dbmdpÅXpt]mse Ah³ thsd FhnsSsb¦nepw P\n¨n«p­mhptam...

Ah³ acn¨t¸mÄ Rm\msI XIÀ ìt]mbn. Ahs\s¶ henb Imcyambnêì. Ahs\s¶ In¨p F¶mbnêì hnfn¨nê¶Xv. Bsc¦nepw sNÃt¸cn«v hnfnç¶Xv F\n¡nãambnêì. ]s£ Fsâ Pohn¯Xn Aê¬ am{Xsa A§s\ hnfn¨nêì. AXpsIm­v A¨mb³ Fs¶ A§s\ hnfnçtam F¶v Rm³ tNmZnç¶Xv....

kmÀ Fsâ A¨mbsâ acWw h¨v Hê kn\naív IYbm¡nIqsS... UosäbvÂkv thWsa¦n Rm³ IeIväv sN¿mw... ]änbm Xnc¡Y Xs¶ Rm³ FgpXn¯cmw.... kmÀ X¶ Hê ss[cy¯nem Rm³ C§s\ FgpXnt¸mæ¶Xv.....

kmÀ A¨mb³ \¶mbn shÅaSnçw. Fsâ `À¯mhpw \¶mbn ]qkmæw. ]mÀ«nIgnªphêt¼mÄ sIm­phcmdpÅ aZyç¸nIÄ FSp¯zíp¶Xv Fsâ ]Wn BbXpsIm­v `À¯mhnÃm¯ t\c¯v Rmëw A¨mbëw tNÀ¶v \ÃXpt]mse X«pw. Bßm¡Ä tSÌv sN¿pIsbbpÅp F¶v ]dbp¶Xv icnbà kmÀ...

AZriy\mbn hcmw FìÅXpsIm­v A¨mbt\mSv Rm³ Hê I­oj³ h¨n«p­v. Hê ImcWhimepw Fsâ s_Uv dqanteçw _m¯v dqanteçw hcêsX¶v.

Aê¬ hê¶Xv In¨Wnteçw ssU\nwKv dqanteçamWv. Nnet¸mÄ XpWn Aeç¶nSt¯çw hêw. At¶cw Ah³ Fs¶ C§s\ t\m¡nbncnçw ]s£ AI¯v h¶m hmtXmcmsX Rm\ht\mSv an­nsIm­ncnçw. Ct¸mÄ Ah³ hcm¯XpsIm­v FÃmw Rm³ A¨mbt\mSmWv ]dbp¶Xv. A¨mbsâ tIknsâ Imcyw ]dªv R§sfm¶v ]nW§n. Fsâ kmsd Cu tIkpw tXªpamªpt]mæw. kmdn\dnbmtem knwK¸qcn h¨v acn¨v t]mb cmP³ ]ntÅsS Imcyw. hà sXfnhpap­mbm... tIsk´mbn.... Hs¡ ]gb IYt]mse BbntÃ... Rm\nsXms¡ ]dªt¸mÄ A¨mb³ ]Ãndp½pIbpw apãnNpê«pIbpsams¡ sNbvXp.

im]§Ä Hìw ]n ´pSc¯ Hê P·hpanÃ. sIm¶hÀ henb]pÅnIfmbncnçw. BÀs¡ms¡tbm F´nt\ms¡tbm Bbn æsd Xoêam\§Ä D­mbncnçw . Hìw \½psS Cãhpw k¦Â]hpw h¨tÃm \Sç¶Xv.

kmÀ A¨mb³ hê¶Xn\nt¸mÄ t\chpw ImehpanÃ. Bßm¡Ä¡v A§s\ IrXyamb kabsamìanÃmbncnçw. cm{Xnbn am{Xw hê¶Xv kn\nabn am{XsabpÅp.

Rm³ Du éIgn¨pIgnªt¸mÄ A¨mb³ h¶n«v Ft¶mSv Hê klmbw Bhiys¸«n«p­v. kmdns\s¶ klmbnçhm³ Ignbptam... acnç¶ Znhk¯n A¨mb³ Hê em]v tSm]v FdWmæfs¯ Hê ^vfmän (»q satUmkv) kq£n¨ph¨n«p­v. AXv Ct¸mÄ ]q«n¡nSçIbmWv. AXnsâ Xmt¡m ^vfmänsâ sesäÀt_mIvknep­v. kabw In«nbm AsXms¶Sp¯v XcWw.

A¨mb\Xv In«nbm FÃmImcy¯nëw sXfnhp­mæsa¶mWv. ]dªXv. CXv Rm³ A¨mbs\ {]tIm]n¸n¨Xv sIm­v kw`hn¨XmWv. A¨mb³ Ft¶mSpw Rm³ kmdnt\mSpaÃmsX thtdsb´p amÀ¤améÅXv.... ¹okv kmÀ Rm³ A¨mbë hm¡v sImSpt¯ms«...

A\kqb thétKm]m \ho³ tem¸kn\b¨ CþsabnÂ

{]nbs¸« kplrs¯... hoWmkpæamcëambpÅ Xm¦fpsS kulrZ¯nsâ hgn Fsâ PohnXs¯bpw Hê hebnemçw F¶v Rm³ IêXpì

t\mh Rm³ hmbnçì­v. CXn t]mfn ]n k¡dnbbpsS ^vfmäv Fì ]dbp¶ »q satUmknemWv Rm³ Xmaknç¶Xv. ]s£ ChnsS A§s\ AS¨n«ncnç¶ Hê ^vfmävt]mepanÃtÃm...

F´mWnXnsâ IY.... Rm³ tImtfPv A²ym]nIbmWv... Xm¦Ä¡v sabn Abt¨ms«.....

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